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abigailsmom
07-31-2004, 06:24 AM
ladies I trust your opinion would rather hear neg. stuff from you than my family... Honestly what do you think of the invite I made for Abigail's birthday?

http://www.windsorpeak.com/dc/user_files/9998.txt


Thanks in advance!

amp
07-31-2004, 12:23 PM
It's adorable! The only thing I can think of is that you might not need to say "age" 2, but maybe just 2 by itself. It doesn't flow as well for me with the "age" in there.

Also, you can put "regrets only please" if that's all you want people to call with, but the way you have it is fine too.

It's really cute, and really, you don't need to do anything to it to make it cuter! Good work!

jec2
07-31-2004, 05:38 PM
Oh how cute! I agree about changing it from "age 2" to "2." Otherwise, it's perfect :)

pritchettzoo
07-31-2004, 10:14 PM
That's so cute! If your family says anything negative, well, they're just being jerks!

How are you doing, BTW?

Anna

papal
08-01-2004, 12:25 AM
VERY CUTE!!! Love it, love the fish and the font and the colours! Great job mama!