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    abigailsmom Guest

    Default Looking for feedback on an invite?

    ladies I trust your opinion would rather hear neg. stuff from you than my family... Honestly what do you think of the invite I made for Abigail's birthday?

    http://www.windsorpeak.com/dc/user_files/9998.txt


    Thanks in advance!

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    amp Guest

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    It's adorable! The only thing I can think of is that you might not need to say "age" 2, but maybe just 2 by itself. It doesn't flow as well for me with the "age" in there.

    Also, you can put "regrets only please" if that's all you want people to call with, but the way you have it is fine too.

    It's really cute, and really, you don't need to do anything to it to make it cuter! Good work!

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    Oh how cute! I agree about changing it from "age 2" to "2." Otherwise, it's perfect :)
    Juliet, mama to DS 10/03 & DS 11/06

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    pritchettzoo Guest

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    That's so cute! If your family says anything negative, well, they're just being jerks!

    How are you doing, BTW?

    Anna

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    papal Guest

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    VERY CUTE!!! Love it, love the fish and the font and the colours! Great job mama!

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