DS got into two schools for next year. We are going to one and have to write a formal letter declining the other in order to get a portion of our downpayment back (we sacrifice the application fee). I have never written this type of letter and was hoping for some feedback.
Dear (school director),
thank you for accepting (DS's name) into your Kindergarten program for the 2010-2011 school year. This will be DS's 5th year at the school and we have been very happy with the program. However, (DS's name) was also accepted into another program, and in light of his special needs, we feel X program is a better fit for (DS's name) at this point. Therefore, we are withdrawing DS from the (school name) Kindergarten program for 2010-2011.
We realize that withdrawing after acceptance will mean we forfeit the application fee and a portion of the down payment for next year. It is our understanding that withdrawing between April 1 and June 30, 2010 means that we should receive half of this down payment back. Can you please advise us on this.
Thank you again,
OUR NAMES