What do you think of the wording on this invitation?

[jgenie]

Thoughts? TIA

http://www.evite.com/plus/create/sta...ty-invitations

[SnuggleBuggles]

I think it's cute.

[jgenie]

I think it's cute.

You don't find the commanded to be off putting?

[squimp]

I think it's cute too. My DD would love that because we talk like that sometimes around here.

[SnuggleBuggles]

You don't find the commanded to be off putting?

Nope. It's a robot voice. It's not the word I'd choose if writing from choose if writing myself but it's fine. I think most people just skim anyway to see party details and won't even notice.

[wencit]

Nope. It's a robot voice. It's not the word I'd choose if writing from choose if writing myself but it's fine. I think most people just skim anyway to see party details and won't even notice.

Case in point, I didn't even notice the "commanded" part until it was mentioned here! I think it's a super cute invitation.

[BunnyBee]

Silly and cute

[3isEnough]

Silly and cute

[ett]

I think it's cute.

[♥ms.pacman♥]

I think it's cute too. My DD would love that because we talk like that sometimes around here.

Yep, same here . My DS would love getting an invite like that.